Tino pai Kahlicia, I really like the images that your have chosen to support your description using your 5 senses. You have described different parts of the Malama Honua event well next time you could think about using more adjectives or figurative language, like metaphors, to make your description even more interesting for your audience. I agree with you, I thought the waiata tira and other waiata would be louder with so many people singing. Do you think that TPS sounded good?
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Tino pai Kahlicia, I really like the images that your have chosen to support your description using your 5 senses. You have described different parts of the Malama Honua event well next time you could think about using more adjectives or figurative language, like metaphors, to make your description even more interesting for your audience.
I agree with you, I thought the waiata tira and other waiata would be louder with so many people singing. Do you think that TPS sounded good?
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