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Wednesday, 31 August 2016

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Why shouldn't we drink fizzy drinks ?


My First Reason


I don't think that we should drink fizzy drinks because it is not healthy for our bodies.The things that it can do to your body is that it can ruin your teeth and can  give you heart damage.


My Second Reason


I don't think that we should drink fizzy drinks because it contain too much sugar.When you drink too much fizzy you can get diabetes from all of the sugar that's in the drink.Fizzy drinks ain't good for children that are still growing up because they can get sick from drinking the fizzy.


My Third Reason


I don't think that we should drink fizzy drinks because it's a waste of money.Some drinks can be expensive .The reason why it's a waste of money is because it's not healthy for us to drink.


My Opinion

I don't think that children should drink fizzy drinks because we could get sick from all of the sugar that's in the drink.Fizzy drinks a bad for children especially if they're still growing up.If children drink too much they can get diabetes and heart damage.

WALT : give our opinion on why we should/shouldn't drink fizzy drinks

Today I have finished off this Doc.This doc is all about why children should /shouldn't drink fizzy 
drinks.We had to at least come up with 3 reasons why we should/shouldn't drink fizzy drinks.Then we had to at least come up with at least 2 examples for each one.Here is my one please enjoy  :)

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